Mittwoch, 11. November 2015

Hannah´s second reason

Hannah´s second reason

I can understand why Hannah is angry. If you are new in a city, it is always hard. I think that Hannah is also injured for one part because everybody thought wrong from her. 

I do not undertsand why Alex has made this list because it personally brings him nothing.

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5 Kommentare:

  1. CGD ID15. November 2015 um 08:34

    Hey Lina!
    I really like your Blogpost because you say why you understand Hannah and you mention all the important things.

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  2. cgdEF15. November 2015 um 08:50

    Hello Lina!
    I like your blogpost, because you named every important point without writing too much.

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  3. Englisch EF (Bru)16. November 2015 um 09:20

    Dear Lina,

    thanks for you first blog entry. It is unfortunately a bit short, but still I like your line of thoughts.
    A few hints on language:
    - "hurt" instead of "injured"
    - think badly about sb
    - " brings him nothing" sounds so German. Better: He does not profit from his silly list

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  4. cgdsw16. November 2015 um 10:28

    Hey Lina!
    I like your blog entry because you didn't write so much but you said all important things.

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  5. Unknown16. November 2015 um 11:15

    Heey Lina
    i like your blog entry. You do not write so much but you tell all the important things

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